TAILIEUCHUNG - Barron's writing for the toefl ibt part 26

While working on Step 3, students can practice revising by checking each other's work using the revision checklist. Again, the Writing Skills section of this book can be studied along with these steps. | Writing Skills Independent Task 177 Paragraph 2 Main idea Traffic congestion is already a problem in our neighborhood and a new restaurant would just add to the problem. Supporting details Most restaurant customers would arrive by car and crowd our streets even more. - In addition they would occupy parking spaces and make it even harder for residents to find places to park near their homes. Paragraph 3 Main idea I m also concerned about the type of patrons a new restaurant would bring into our neighborhood. Supporting details The restaurant would stay open late and people leaving the restaurant might be drunk. - They could be noisy too. Paragraph 4 Main idea Finally there are other types of businesses that we need in our neighborhood more. Supporting details - We already have a restaurant and a couple of coffee shops. We don t have a bookstore or pharmacy however and we have only one small grocery store. Fluency and Cohesion Revision Checklist CONTENT Thesis Statement Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION Transition words Grammar and Spelling Sentence variety S CHECK FOR TRANSITION WORDS This essay uses appropriate transition words. 178 Writing for the TOEFL ÌBT Transition word Paragraph Function however Paragraph 1 4 Shows contrast In addition Paragraphs 1 2 Adds information Most of all Paragraph 1 Adds information also Paragraph 3 Adds information Finally Paragraph 4 Shows order of ideas but Paragraph 5 Shows contrast Moreover Paragraph 5 Adds information Revision Checklist CONTENT Thesis Statement Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION Transition words Grammar and Spelling Sentence variety V CHECK FOR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING There are no grammar or spelling errors in this essay. Revision Checklist CONTENT Thesis Statement Main ideas Supporting details FLUENCY AND COHESION Transition words Grammar and Spelling Sentence variety S CHECK FOR SENTENCE VARIETY This essay uses a variety of sentence structures. Writing Skills Independent Task 179 .

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