TAILIEUCHUNG - Barron's writing for the toefl ibt part 29

The test taker must write a 150- to 225-word summary of the Important points made in the listening passage and explain how these points relate to those in the reading passage. The test taker may write more than 225 words if time permits. | 198 Writing for the TOEFL iBT NOTE Commas help the reader follow your ideas bur be careful not to use them where they arc nor needed. Use a comma to separate a non-restrictive clause. All the neighbors who are very friendly get together for parties and picnics. Use a comma after a subordinate clause at the beginning of a sentence. After I ve chosen an area I decide whether I want to live in a house or an apartment. Semicolon Use a semicolon to separate two closely related sentences. I wanted a renovated townhouse none was available. Colon or Dash Use a colon or dash in front of a list or explanation. I looked at three kinds of apartments studio one-bedroom and two-bedroom. My needs are simple a nice neighborhood and a park nearby. PRACTICE 3 Read the following essay. Then revise the essay adding punctuation. Write on your computer or on a piece of paper. Essay Topic 21 Why People Are Living Longer people are living to be much older these days than ever before the main reasons for this are greater access to health care improved health care and better nutrition. basic health care is available to more people now. when someone is seriously ill he or she can go to a public hospital there are also more clinics and doctors than there used to be Years ago health care wasn t available to everyone some people didn t live near a doctor or hospital and others couldn t pay for the care they needed. people also live longer because the quality of health care has improved doctors now know more about diseases and cures Years ago people died young because of simple things like an infection or a virus now we have antibiotics and other medicines to help cure infections The quality of nutrition has improved also We eat more healthfully than we used to. we know that eating low-fat food can prevent heart disease and we know that eating fruits and vegetables can prevent cancer. Improved health care and healthy eating habits allow us to live longer Now we need to make sure that everyone in

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