TAILIEUCHUNG - GMAT exam success Episode 1 Part 8

Tham khảo tài liệu 'gmat exam success episode 1 part 8', ngoại ngữ, ngữ pháp tiếng anh phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | -------------------------------- SENTENCE CORRECTION ------------------------------------------- 4. Use the active voice. 5. Use variety in sentence structure. 6. Avoid jargon and pretentious language. You will certainly see sentences that violate guidelines 1-4 on the GMAT sentence correction questions. You will probably not see many sentences violating guidelines 5-6 but these style guidelines are nonetheless important and can help you write a better essay on the AWA section. Be Concise On the sentence level in general less is more. The fewer words you use to get your point across the better. Unnecessary words frustrate readers they waste time and often cloud meaning. Notice for example how cluttered and confusing the following sentence from the pretest is Creating a fundamental shift in American foreign policy was the Truman Doctrine which was put forth in 1947 and which established a policy of containment that framed our foreign policy as a battle between the forces of good America along with other democratic societies and the forces of evil the Soviet Union along with other communist nations . Notice the difference in length and clarity after wordiness and redundancy have been eliminated The 1947 Truman Doctrine created a fundamental shift in American foreign policy establishing a policy of containment that framed our foreign policy as a battle between the forces of good America and other democratic societies and evil the Soviet Union and other communist nations . To eliminate wordiness eliminate clutter and unnecessary repetition in your sentences. Rule 19 Be concise. Avoid unnecessary repetition or wordiness. Eliminate Clutter Avoid the following words phrases and constructions that add clutter to your writing. Because of the fact that is an unnecessary and bulky phrase. Because is all you really need Because of the fact that my answering machine is broken I didn t get her message. 15 words Because my answering machine is broken I didn t get her message. 11

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